Re-design

Last week my friends and I had a story meeting about the short film I'm trying to direct this year.  After months of working and re-working story, I think we've finally gotten to a point where we are all satisfied with what we have.  The story has changed so much from the original idea, that I think I have to go back and re-design the character.  I don't think the original design was bad.. I just don't think it fits the needs of the character.  I'm starting to explore different ideas, and hopefully I can come up with with a stronger design.

Here is one of the thumbnails I'm considering.

Also, Here is a sketch of my friend Kayla Rimes.